Suggestion: poster with quick installation guide of Mageia

Hello,
I am suggesting a poster for beginners, a guide to installing Mageia to be linked to the wiki, with guidance on installation.
I made this poster last year for Wiki MandrivaBrasil, this year I adapted for wiki MageiaBrasil (in portuguese) and now I translate into english as a suggestion.
I don't know if the translation is correct.
I am also suggesting a slogan for Mageia (at the end of the poster):
"User Community Mageia Linux"
"Helping to expand the freedom of choice. "
Or better: "Mageia Linux"
"Expanding the freedom of choice ""
What do you think? Suggestions or criticism?
Are there recommendations about the use of the image of Mageia?
Cheers!
Macxi
Click image to enlarge

Note 1: I edited this image in the distribuição Mandriva 2010.2 and Mageia 1 RC , and I used the software KSnapshot, Gimp and Inkscape.
Note 2: If someone want to help edit (to improve) and translate into other languages, calls here.
I am suggesting a poster for beginners, a guide to installing Mageia to be linked to the wiki, with guidance on installation.
I made this poster last year for Wiki MandrivaBrasil, this year I adapted for wiki MageiaBrasil (in portuguese) and now I translate into english as a suggestion.
I don't know if the translation is correct.
I am also suggesting a slogan for Mageia (at the end of the poster):
"User Community Mageia Linux"
"Helping to expand the freedom of choice. "
Or better: "Mageia Linux"
"Expanding the freedom of choice ""
What do you think? Suggestions or criticism?
Are there recommendations about the use of the image of Mageia?
Cheers!

Macxi
Click image to enlarge

Note 1: I edited this image in the distribuição Mandriva 2010.2 and Mageia 1 RC , and I used the software KSnapshot, Gimp and Inkscape.
Note 2: If someone want to help edit (to improve) and translate into other languages, calls here.